Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接表达了“有自行车”的意思，但后半部分语法和表达不清楚。应使用过去时，例如将“go”改为“went”，并明确表达家人为你买了自行车，不能说“my family by boat or bike for me”。可以先给出清晰的主题句，再补充自行车的用途或使用场景。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school by myself because my school was quite close to my home. My parents bought it for me when I was about eight years old.

提案: 回答包含了观点和两个理由，但存在明显的语法问题，如“is was”“can people can use”和“don't worry”。应使用现在时表达当前情况，例如“Bikes are very popular nowadays”，并用连接词连接理由。还可以加入具体人群或场景，使内容更自然、更有细节。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them to avoid traffic congestion and find parking more easily. In addition, cycling is an affordable and environmentally friendly way to travel.

× Yes, in my childhood I usually go to school by myself, so I uh, my family by boat or bike for me to go to school.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I usually went to school by myself, so my family bought a bike for me to go to school.

问题发生在过去，“when I was a child”表示过去时间，因此动词 go 应使用过去式 went。回答过去经历时，要保持整句话的时态一致。

× Yes, in my childhood I usually go to school by myself, so I uh, my family by boat or bike for me to go to school.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I usually went to school by myself, so my family bought a bike for me to go to school.

原句中的“my family by boat or bike”缺少谓语动词，句子结构不完整。需要加入 bought，组成完整的“主语 + 谓语 + 宾语”结构。建议说话时先确定每个分句的主语和谓语。

× Yes, I think nowadays the bike is was very popular can people can use it to avoid traffic and don't worry about parking.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular nowadays because people can use them to avoid traffic and don't have to worry about parking.

这里是在泛指自行车，而不是一辆特定的自行车，所以应使用复数 bikes。相应地，be 动词也要使用复数形式 are。

× Yes, I think nowadays the bike is was very popular can people can use it to avoid traffic and don't worry about parking.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular nowadays because people can use them to avoid traffic and don't have to worry about parking.

nowadays 表示“现在、如今”，所以应使用一般现在时。原句中的 is was 混用了两个 be 动词；这里应直接使用 are。

× Yes, I think nowadays the bike is was very popular can people can use it to avoid traffic and don't worry about parking.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular nowadays because people can use them to avoid traffic and don't have to worry about parking.

前面的名词 bikes 是复数，因此后面的宾语代词应使用复数形式 them，而不是单数形式 it。代词必须与它所指代的名词在数上保持一致。

× Yes, I think nowadays the bike is was very popular can people can use it to avoid traffic and don't worry about parking.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular nowadays because people can use them to avoid traffic and don't have to worry about parking.

原句中两个分句之间缺少连接词，导致句子连接不完整。because 可以说明自行车受欢迎的原因，表示“因为人们可以使用自行车避开交通拥堵”。

× Yes, I think nowadays the bike is was very popular can people can use it to avoid traffic and don't worry about parking.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular nowadays because people can use them to avoid traffic and don't have to worry about parking.

原句重复使用了 can，形成“can people can use”的错误结构。并且“不会担心停车”应表达为 don’t have to worry，而不是直接使用 don’t worry。情态动词后面通常直接接动词原形，不能重复使用两个 can。