Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer responds directly and includes a specific detail about when you learned to ride, which is effective. However, “ride at comfortably” is grammatically incorrect; use “ride comfortably” or “ride it comfortably.” You could also add a brief result or memory to make the answer more natural and developed. Keep the answer concise and use linking words such as “because” or “as a result” to connect the details.

例: Yes, I did. My parents taught me how to ride a bicycle when I was three years old, and they helped me a lot at the beginning. As a result, I became quite confident and often rode my bike around the neighborhood.

提案: You answer the question directly, but “Most of them” is unclear because it does not specify who you mean, and “would like to prefer” is incorrect and redundant. Say “Most people prefer riding a bicycle to riding a motorcycle.” Avoid ending with “So yeah,” and support your opinion with a specific reason, such as lower cost, health benefits, or convenience. Use a linking word like “because” to make the response more coherent.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people prefer riding bicycles to riding motorcycles because bikes are cheaper and better for the environment. They are especially common among students and people who live close to their workplaces.

× My parents taught me how to ride a bicycle when I was three years old and they helped me a lot to ride at comfortably.

✓ My parents taught me how to ride a bicycle when I was three years old, and they helped me a lot to ride comfortably.

The preposition at is incorrect before the adverb comfortably. The verb phrase should be ride comfortably, without a preposition. Also, a comma before and helps separate the two independent clauses more clearly.

× Most of them would like to prefer to ride a bicycle over a motorcycle.

✓ Most people prefer to ride a bicycle rather than a motorcycle.

The pronoun them refers grammatically to bicycles, but bicycles cannot have preferences or choose to ride. Use the noun phrase most people instead. The phrase prefer to ride is also the natural structure for expressing a preference.

× Most of them would like to prefer to ride a bicycle over a motorcycle.

✓ Most people prefer to ride a bicycle rather than a motorcycle.

Would like to prefer is unnecessarily complicated and does not express the intended general fact. Use the present-tense verb prefer to state a general preference. The structure prefer A rather than B is also natural for comparing two choices.