Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Use “had” instead of “have,” “was” instead of “am,” and say “a red bike” rather than “that red color bike.” Add one specific detail about how you used the bike to make the answer more complete and natural.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a red bike when I was in seventh grade. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed spending time outdoors.

提案: Give a clear answer and avoid the unnatural phrase “very much popular”; use “very popular” instead. Correct the subject-verb agreement in “every man are” and replace the unclear phrase “for their small org bigger” with a specific explanation, such as using bikes for short or long journeys. Avoid ending with “Yeah” because it sounds informal and unnecessary.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips, commuting to work, and running errands because they are affordable and convenient. Motorbikes are especially common in crowded cities, where they can help people avoid traffic.

× Yes I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about your childhood, so you should use the past tense. Use had instead of have because the possession existed in the past.

× My parents bought me that red color bike when I am in 7th standard.

✓ My parents bought me that red bike when I was in the 7th grade.

The clause refers to a past time, so use was instead of am. Also, red bike is the natural adjective-noun combination, and the 7th grade normally takes the definite article the.

× Yes, bikes are very much popular in my country and every man are using frequently for their small org bigger.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and people frequently use them for small or big errands.

Very popular is the natural expression; very much is not normally used before the adjective popular. Use big rather than bigger because you are contrasting two types of errands, not comparing one errand with another.

× Yes, bikes are very much popular in my country and every man are using frequently for their small org bigger.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and people frequently use them for small or big errands.

The intended conjunction is or, not org. Use or to present alternatives: small or big errands. In speaking, clearly pronounce the final sound in or.

× Yes, bikes are very much popular in my country and every man are using frequently for their small org bigger.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and people frequently use them for small or big errands.

The pronoun them correctly refers back to bikes. People is also more natural and inclusive than every man when referring to bicycle users in general.

× Yes, bikes are very much popular in my country and every man are using frequently for their small org bigger.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and people frequently use them for small or big errands.

Every man is singular and would require is, but people is a more natural subject here and requires the plural verb use. Always make sure the subject and verb agree in number.