Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: say “I had a bike” instead of “I have a bike.” Also, replace unnatural expressions such as “they make me to feel how to ride a bike” and “how to feel that air” with clear phrases like “they taught me how to ride it” and “I enjoyed the feeling of the wind.” Organize the answer with a direct statement followed by one specific family detail.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and my parents taught me how to ride it. We often went cycling together at weekends, and I really enjoyed feeling the wind on my face.

提案: Answer directly with “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Avoid the incorrect phrase “in during the sunny weather” and use “especially when the weather is sunny.” Use accurate grammar, such as “people ride bikes” and “cycling events,” and avoid repeating “bike,” “cycling,” and “activities.” Add one clear reason or example to make the response more specific.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially when the weather is sunny. Many children ride them for fun, while adults often cycle for exercise or transportation. There are also several cycling events and marathons that attract people of different ages.

× When I was a child I have a bike and this is kind of family time with my parents because they make me to feel how to ride a bike, how to feel that air

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike, and it was a kind of family time with my parents because they taught me how to ride a bike and enjoy the fresh air.

The question asks about a past childhood experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use had instead of have, was instead of is, and taught instead of make. Also, taught someone how to do something is the natural verb pattern.

× Mostly yes because in during the sunny weather and not only children like to ride a bike and also there are different marphons where people riding a bike and doing activities like sport and cycling

✓ Mostly yes, because during sunny weather, not only children like to ride bikes, but there are also different marphons where people ride bikes and take part in sports and cycling activities.

In and during should not be used together in this phrase. Use during sunny weather because during already expresses the time period.

× Mostly yes because in during the sunny weather and not only children like to ride a bike and also there are different marphons where people riding a bike and doing activities like sport and cycling

✓ Mostly yes, because during sunny weather, not only children like to ride bikes, but there are also different marphons where people ride bikes and take part in sports and cycling activities.

The expression not only must be paired with but also. The corrected structure is not only children like to ride bikes, but there are also different marphons.

× Mostly yes because in during the sunny weather and not only children like to ride a bike and also there are different marphons where people riding a bike and doing activities like sport and cycling

✓ Mostly yes, because during sunny weather, not only children like to ride bikes, but there are also different marphons where people ride bikes and take part in sports and cycling activities.

This sentence describes general activities and habits, so use the simple present tense. Replace people riding with people ride. The clause needs a properly conjugated present-tense verb.