Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính là “có”, nhưng một số câu chưa rõ nghĩa và có lỗi dùng từ nghiêm trọng. “I have a bike whenever I try” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh quá khứ; nên nói “I had a bike when I was a child.” Từ “psychoist” không đúng và có thể bạn muốn nói “cycling” hoặc “bicycles”. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp “travel” và sửa cấu trúc “helps people travel more conveniently”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp trước, sau đó thêm một lý do hoặc kỷ niệm cụ thể bằng từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example”.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school because it was a convenient way to get around. I also enjoyed cycling with my friends at the weekend.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra lý do về sự tiện lợi, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt ở cuối và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Dùng “Bikes are popular” thay vì “bike's more popular”, “workers and students” thay vì “worker or students”, và nói “go to school or work” thay vì “go to company factory”. Không nên dùng “recharge batteries” để diễn tả việc con người thư giãn; có thể dùng “relieve stress” hoặc “get some exercise”. Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc: ý kiến chính, lý do, rồi thêm một kết quả hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and office workers. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys to school or work. Besides, cycling helps people stay fit and avoid traffic jams.

× I have a bike whenever I try.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the simple past tense had instead of the present perfect form have. Also, when I was a child clearly matches the time reference in the question.

× I think psychoist means to travel.

✓ I think bicycles are a means of transportation.

The original sentence has an incorrect or unclear sentence structure. Use bicycles as the subject, are as the linking verb, and a means of transportation as the complement. Learn useful fixed expressions such as a means of transportation.

× It helps people travel travel more convenient and necessary to people

✓ It helps people travel more conveniently and is necessary for people.

Convenient is an adjective, but it modifies the verb travel, so the adverb conveniently is required. The repeated word travel should also be removed. Use necessary for people rather than necessary to people in this context.

× I think bike's more popular in my country it's more convenient for worker or students to travel to go to school or go to company factory.

✓ I think bikes are more popular in my country because they are more convenient for workers and students to travel to school or work.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Workers and students should also be plural because the sentence refers to groups of people. Use are and they to agree with the plural subject. The word bike's is incorrect here because the apostrophe indicates possession or a contraction, not a plural form.

× I think bike's more popular in my country it's more convenient for worker or students to travel to go to school or go to company factory.

✓ I think bikes are more popular in my country because they are more convenient for workers and students to travel to school or work.

The original contains two independent clauses joined without a suitable conjunction, creating a run-on sentence. Use because to show the reason. Also, use the more natural expressions travel to school and go to work instead of travel to go to school and go to company factory.

× Besides it helps people recharge batteries and

✓ Besides, it helps people recharge their batteries.

The sentence ends with and, so it is incomplete because the conjunction introduces an unfinished idea. Remove and or add another complete clause after it. The possessive determiner their makes it clear whose batteries are being recharged.