Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，也给出了原因，但两个 because 造成重复和逻辑不够自然；“in my childhood”可改为“as a child”，“until two years ago”后应清楚说明你是在那时学会骑车。建议使用一个 because，并补充一句学习骑车后的体验，使答案更流畅、具体。

例: Not really. I couldn’t ride a bike as a child, so I didn’t own one until two years ago, when I finally learned how to ride. Since then, I’ve enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood because it’s both relaxing and convenient.

提案: 回答观点明确，但“ride bike”应改为“ride bikes”，“the shining back”表达不准确，可能想说“共享单车”，应使用“bike-sharing”或“shared bikes”。此外，前两句意思重复，可以合并，并用具体原因或例子支持观点，例如共享单车方便、环保，且学生经常使用。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. I often see people riding bicycles on the streets, and bike-sharing is particularly common among students because shared bikes are affordable and convenient for short trips. They are also an environmentally friendly way to travel.

× Yes, of course. Bikes are quite popular in China. I often see people ride bike on the streets and the shining back is very popular among students.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are quite popular in China. I often see people ride bikes on the streets and the shining back is very popular among students.

“people”表示复数的人，因此后面的“bike”应使用复数形式“bikes”。这里的意思是人们骑自行车这一类交通工具，所以应说“ride bikes”。建议注意：当表示一类事物或泛指多个物品时，通常要使用可数名词的复数形式。