Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly with the natural phrase “when I was a child” rather than “in my childhood.” You could also add one specific detail, such as when you used the bicycle or where you rode it, to make the answer more developed. Keep the response concise and use a complete, natural sentence.

例: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed learning how to balance on it.

提案: Use “especially” instead of “specially,” and avoid repeating “bikes” and “bicycle.” Correct the grammar by saying “people who cannot afford a car use bicycles” and “my father uses his bike for daily transportation.” Organize the answer with a clear reason and a specific example, using a linking word such as “for example.”

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among people who cannot afford a car. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel. For example, my father uses his bike for his daily commute.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, specially the people who can cannot afford a car, uses a bicycle or a bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among people who cannot afford a car and use a bicycle or a bike.

Specially means for a particular purpose, whereas especially means particularly. Use especially here because you are emphasizing one group of people. Also, especially should be followed by a suitable preposition such as among when referring to a group.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, specially the people who can cannot afford a car, uses a bicycle or a bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among people who cannot afford a car and use a bicycle or a bike.

Can and cannot cannot be used together in this sentence. Use cannot to express that these people are unable to afford a car. Avoid combining a positive modal with its negative form unless you are making a specific contrast.

× My father personally use a bike for her daily transportation.

✓ My father personally uses a bike for his daily transportation.

The subject my father is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be uses, not use. In the present simple, add -s or -es to the verb when the subject is he, she, or it.

× My father personally use a bike for her daily transportation.

✓ My father personally uses a bike for his daily transportation.

My father is male, so the possessive pronoun must be his, not her. Use his for something belonging to a male person and her for something belonging to a female person.