Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có ý định trả lời “có”, nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và chưa diễn đạt rõ ý. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: “Yes, I did.” hoặc “Yes, I had a bike when I was a little girl.” Lưu ý dùng “was” với “I”, không dùng “were”; đồng thời tránh cụm từ không rõ nghĩa “I have is when I were sick girl”. Nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn ai đã mua xe hoặc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a little girl. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Câu trả lời khá trực tiếp và có lý do phù hợp, nhưng cần sửa “it” thành “they” hoặc “bikes” vì danh từ chính là số nhiều. Cần thêm mạo từ trong “the environment”: “They are good for the environment.” Ngoài ra, câu trả lời chỉ có một ý ngắn; hãy bổ sung một ví dụ hoặc kết quả cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp giúp giảm ô nhiễm và được học sinh sử dụng. Có thể dùng từ nối như “also” hoặc “for example” để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are good for the environment. They do not produce air pollution, and many students ride them to school because they are also inexpensive.

× Yes, I have is when I were sick girl.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a girl.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have. The verb were is incorrect with the singular subject I; use was. Use had one to express possession of a bike in the past.

× Yes, I have is when I were sick girl.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a girl.

A singular countable noun such as girl needs an article. Use a before girl: a girl. The phrase when I was a girl is the correct grammatical expression.

× Yes, because it is very good for environment.

✓ Yes, because they are very good for the environment.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it.

× Yes, because it is very good for environment.

✓ Yes, because they are very good for the environment.

The plural subject they must be followed by the plural verb are. Do not use is with a plural subject.

× Yes, because it is very good for environment.

✓ Yes, because they are very good for the environment.

Environment is used here as a specific general environment, so it normally takes the definite article the: the environment.