Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Begin with a clear response such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details about the bike or how often you used it.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but it is too brief and repetitive. Add a reason, a specific example, or a comparison, using a linking word such as “because,” “especially,” or “for example” to develop your answer naturally.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and university students. They are affordable and convenient, and many people use them to travel short distances or exercise.