Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答有明确观点和个人经历，但存在较多语法、搭配和重复问题。应使用过去时，例如将“enjoy”改为“enjoyed”，将“when I grow up”改为“as I grew older”。“going cycling with my bike”不够自然，可以说“riding my bike”；“once and once and once”应改为“again and again”。此外，“both my knee”应为“both my knees”。建议用“直接回答 + 具体经历 + 结果”的结构，并减少重复表达。

例: Yes, I did. I enjoyed riding my bike when I was younger, although it was also a rather traumatic experience because I kept falling off and hurting both my knees. As I grew older, I became quite afraid of cycling.

提案: 回答的核心观点比较清楚，但内容没有完整结束，影响了连贯性和有效性。应使用“bike-sharing service”而不是“bike wandling service”，使用“rent”而不是“rental”，并将“the people”简化为“people”。“go short cycling”可以改为“go on short bike rides”，“simple surface”表达不清，可能想说“scenic routes”或“designated cycling paths”。建议补充一个具体地点、原因或结果，并用“because”或“for example”连接细节。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. There are bike-sharing services in many cities, so people can easily rent different kinds of bikes for short trips. For example, Taipei has several popular cycling routes, especially along the riverside, where people can enjoy the scenery and exercise.

× when I was smaller, I enjoy going cycling with my bike

✓ when I was smaller, I enjoyed going cycling with my bike

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应该使用过去时。主语是 I，所以 enjoy 的过去式是 enjoyed。

× it was a very traumatic experience for me but because I kept on falling down from the bicycle

✓ it was a very traumatic experience for me because I kept on falling down from the bicycle

这里 because 已经表示原因，不需要在它前面再使用 but。删除多余的 but，可以使句子结构更清楚。

× I hurt both my knee

✓ I hurt both my knees

both 表示“两者”，后面的可数名词必须使用复数形式。因此 knee 应改为 knees。

× So when I grow up I'm really afraid of going cycling

✓ So as I grew up, I became really afraid of going cycling

这段内容是在讲过去的童年经历，所以 grow 应使用过去式 grew。为了保持过去叙述的一致性，am afraid 也应改为 became afraid。

× In my country there is bike rental service

✓ In my country there is a bike rental service

单数可数名词 service 前面需要使用冠词。这里是第一次提到某一种自行车租赁服务，所以使用不定冠词 a。

× the people always rental different kinds of bikes

✓ people always rent different kinds of bikes

句子描述的是一个经常发生的事实，应该使用一般现在时。rent 是动词，不能使用名词形式 rental。people 是复数主语，所以动词使用原形 rent。

× go short cycling

✓ go cycling for short distances

英语中通常说 go cycling，表示“骑自行车”。如果要表达“进行短距离骑行”，应使用 for short distances，而不是 short cycling。

× like in Taipo in

✓ such as those in Taipo

原短语以 in 结尾，结构不完整。such as those in Taipo 可以完整地引出“太埔的这些地点”，使句子结构完整。