Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt vermeye çalışıyor; ancak zaman ve kelime kullanımı hatalı. Geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için “have” yerine “had” kullanmalısınız. “A child’s” burada doğru değildir; bunun yerine “a bike” veya “one” denir. Kısa bir neden ya da ayrıntı ekleyerek cevabı daha doğal ve etkili hâle getirebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: Cümlenizde kelime sıralaması ve isim kullanımı hatalı. “Most people in my country ride bikes” veya “Bikes are popular in my country” şeklinde konuşmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtladıktan sonra, kullanım alanı veya neden gibi belirli bir ayrıntı ekleyin. “My country’s most people” ve “are bike” ifadelerini kullanmaktan kaçının.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× Yes, I have a child's.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question refers to a past period, childhood, so the past-tense form had is required instead of have. Use had when describing possession in the past.

× Yes, I have a child's.

✓ Yes, I had one.

A child's is not the correct noun phrase for referring to a bike. Use the pronoun one to avoid repeating bike. For example, you can say, I had one.

× My country's most people are bike.

✓ Most people in my country ride bikes.

The noun bike should be plural because the sentence refers to bikes in general. Use bikes after referring to most people and general habits.

× My country's most people are bike.

✓ Most people in my country ride bikes.

The phrase my country's most people is incorrect. Use the preposition in to show location: most people in my country. Use in my country when describing people who live there.