Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct, but it is too short to develop your response. Give a direct answer and add a brief reason or detail. For example, explain whether your parents did not buy you one or whether you preferred another form of transport.

例: No, I didn’t. My parents didn’t buy me a bike because we lived near my school, so I usually walked there.

提案: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating words such as “popular.” You should also distinguish between bicycles and motorcycles, because Hero, Splendor, and Kawasaki are mainly motorcycle brands. Avoid fillers such as “uh” and support your opinion with a specific reason, such as affordability or convenience.

例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country, especially brands like Hero, Splendor, and Kawasaki. Many people use them because they are affordable, fuel-efficient, and convenient for travelling through busy city streets.

× Yes, some popular bikes are popular in my country like Heroes, Splendor, uh, and uh uh, Kawasaki.

✓ Yes, some bikes, such as Hero, Splendor, and Kawasaki, are popular in my country.

The adjective popular is unnecessarily repeated. Use such as to introduce examples more naturally. Also, bike brand names should be written consistently without an unnecessary plural ending: Hero, Splendor, and Kawasaki.