Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too short and repeats the wording of the question. Add one specific supporting detail, such as how often you used the bike, where you rode it, or why you enjoyed it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, especially on weekends. It was a great way to have fun and spend time outdoors.

提案: You express a relevant opinion, but the sentence is difficult to follow because the grammar and word choices are inaccurate. Say “I think they are popular because...” instead of “I do think because,” and explain that bikes can avoid traffic rather than “access congested roads and trees.” Use linking words such as “also” or “for example,” avoid unnecessary fillers, and use the plural “cars” when speaking generally.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and affordable. They allow people to avoid traffic jams, especially in crowded cities. In addition, many people use them for short trips because bikes are environmentally friendly and easy to park.

× Yes, I do think because using bikes we can access, uh, many congested roads and trees and uh, we can easily reach any place using bikes rather than, uh, car.

✓ Yes, I do, because by using bikes, we can access many congested roads and trees, and we can easily reach any place by bike rather than by car.

The conjunction because should not directly follow do think in this sentence. Use a comma after Yes, I do, and then introduce the reason with because. The phrase by using bikes is also a clearer way to express the method.

× Yes, I do think because using bikes we can access, uh, many congested roads and trees and uh, we can easily reach any place using bikes rather than, uh, car.

✓ Yes, I do, because by using bikes, we can access many congested roads and trees, and we can easily reach any place by bike rather than by cars.

Bikes is plural, so cars is used for a parallel comparison. Keeping both nouns plural makes the comparison grammatically consistent. You can also use by bike rather than by car when speaking about transportation in general.

× Yes, I do think because using bikes we can access, uh, many congested roads and trees and uh, we can easily reach any place using bikes rather than, uh, car.

✓ Yes, I do, because by using bikes, we can access many congested roads and trees, and we can easily reach any place by bike rather than by a car.

The singular countable noun car needs an article. Use a car when referring to one car generally. When talking about transportation in general, the expression by car does not need an article.