Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 「No」と直接答えた後、理由を1つに整理し、幼少期の具体的な経験を加えると、内容がより自然で効果的になります。"we can travel by transportation" は不自然なので、"my family usually used public transport" のように言い換えてください。また、比較級は "more convenient than cycling" が正しく、"than" の重複は避ける必要があります。"because" で始まる文を独立させず、前の文とつなげると文法的にも自然です。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike because I wasn’t interested in cycling. My family usually travelled by bus or car, which was more convenient for us. So, I never felt the need to learn how to ride one.

提案: 意見は明確ですが、"Because" と "So" で始まる文が続いているため、理由を1つのまとまった文にしてください。"different transportation" は不自然なので、"various forms of public transport" または具体的に "buses and minibuses" と言うと自然です。"AR" は聞き手に伝わりにくいため、意図が車なら "cars" と明確にしてください。さらに、都市部の交通事情や自転車を使う人が少ない理由など、具体的な説明を1文加えると内容と語彙の評価が上がります。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people use buses, minibuses, or cars because public transport is widely available and convenient. Bikes are mainly used for exercise rather than for commuting.

× No, because I don't like cycling and we can travel by transportation.

✓ No, because I didn't like cycling and we could travel by other means of transportation.

Because the question asks about your childhood, the reason should be expressed in the past tense. Use didn't like instead of don't like and could instead of can to describe what was possible at that time.

× It is convenient than than cycling.

✓ It is more convenient than cycling.

For a comparison with the adjective convenient, use the comparative form more convenient. Use than only once after the comparative adjective.

× Because we can travel by different transportation, for example, bus, minibus or AR.

✓ I don't think so because we can travel by different means of transportation, such as buses, minibuses, or cars.

The original sentence begins with Because but does not contain an independent main clause, so it is a sentence fragment. Connect the because-clause to I don't think so. Also, means of transportation is the natural expression in this context.