Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: La risposta non risponde alla domanda e confonde “bike” con “biker”. “Bike” significa bicicletta, mentre “biker” indica una persona che va in bicicletta o in moto. Rispondi direttamente con “Yes” o “No” e aggiungi un dettaglio personale, come il tipo di bicicletta o il luogo in cui la usavi.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: L’idea principale è poco chiara e la frase contiene un errore grammaticale: non si dice “my brother is one of them” per riferirsi alle biciclette. Rispondi direttamente alla domanda spiegando perché le biciclette sono o non sono popolari. Usa un collegamento come “because” e aggiungi un esempio specifico, ad esempio il loro uso per il trasporto, lo sport o il tempo libero.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. Many people, including my brother, use them to exercise or travel short distances.

× Yes, I think because my brother is one of them

✓ Yes, I think they are popular because my brother rides one.

The pronoun 'them' refers to the plural noun 'bikes', so 'my brother is one of them' incorrectly suggests that the brother is a bike. Use 'one' to refer to a single bike, and use 'rides one' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I think because my brother is one of them

✓ Yes, I think they are popular because my brother rides one.

The structure 'I think because' is incomplete and unclear because 'think' needs a complete clause after it. Use 'I think they are popular because...' to give the opinion and its reason in a complete sentence.