Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address the question and contains an irrelevant word: “boyfriend” instead of “bike.” Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, and use the past tense “had” because the question refers to your childhood. You could briefly add a reason or detail, such as how often you rode the bike or who gave it to you.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and it was a great way to have fun and stay active.

提案: Your answer does not respond to the question and is not a complete or meaningful response in this context. State your opinion directly using “Yes, I think bikes are popular” or “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular.” Then support your opinion with a specific reason, such as traffic, public transportation, safety, or environmental concerns.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are convenient and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I have a boyfriend.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past situation when you were a child, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of the present-tense form have. Also, boyfriend does not answer the question about owning a bike. To improve, identify the main verb in the question and use the same tense in your answer.

× Write a note in your country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence does not answer the question and uses the imperative verb Write instead of a suitable present-tense statement. Because the examiner asks about the current popularity of bikes, use the present tense are. To improve, answer directly with the subject bikes and the verb are.