Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答问题，因此无法展示流利度、词汇和语法能力。应直接回答“是”或“否”，然后补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的时间、地点或用途。回答最好包含2—3句话，并使用“because”“when”或“so”等连接词。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, because it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

提案: “Pause”不是对问题的有效回答，因此没有提供任何观点或支持细节。你应该先明确表达观点，再说明原因，并可以补充一个具体例子或进行简单比较。建议使用“because”“especially”或“for example”来使答案更连贯。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who commute short distances. For example, many people use shared bikes because they are convenient and affordable.