Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ звучит грамматически правильно, но слишком краткий и немного неестественный: нет четкого топик‑предложения и дополнительных деталей. Постарайтесь дать короткое вступление (топик‑предложение), затем одно-два конкретных уточнения (например, какого это был велосипед, с кем вы ездили, какие воспоминания). Используйте связку для логичности (for example, when, because).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon after school. For example, my father often taught me to balance and we would go to the park together.

提案: Ответ содержит ясную позицию, но слишком категоричный и обобщающий «everybody». Нет поддержки конкретными причинами или примерами. Нужно использовать более точные слова, привести причины и, при необходимости, контраст (however, but). Избегайте абсолютных выражений, добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей.

例: I don't think cycling is very popular in my country, mainly because public and private transport by car is more convenient for most people. For instance, many cities lack safe cycle lanes, and as a result people prefer driving or using buses rather than riding bicycles.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the auxiliary 'did' with the main verb 'have' in an affirmative past tense sentence. In English, use the simple past form without 'did' for affirmative statements: 'I had' not 'I did have'. Replace 'did have' with 'had' to be grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'did' + base verb only for negative or interrogative forms (e.g., 'Did you have...?') and use the simple past form for affirmative sentences (e.g., 'I had...').

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because everybody usually rides on a car.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because everybody usually rides in a car.

The verb 'ride' with vehicles like 'car' typically uses the preposition 'in' (ride in a car). Using 'on' implies being astride something like a bicycle or motorcycle. Replace 'on a car' with 'in a car' to match standard English usage. Suggestion: Use 'ride in a car' for being a passenger inside a car; use 'ride on a bike/motorcycle/horse' for being on top of those vehicles.