Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит повтор. Необходимо ответить прямо, дать одну-две дополнительные детали и использовать связки. Избегайте повтора вопроса и грамматических ошибок. Постройте ответ: утверждение + причина или пример. Например: "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood, which helped me feel independent."

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to visit my friends and explore the nearby park, which made my childhood very active.

提案: Ответ неясен и грамматически неверен. Нужно прямо ответить «да» или «нет», затем пояснить причину с использованием связок (because, so, therefore). Используйте конкретные факты: кто пользуется велосипедами и почему (экономия, здоровье, транспорт). Не более 3-4 предложений и без лишних слов-паразитов («you see»).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to save money and avoid traffic. For example, students and workers often cycle to school or to work, especially in cities where parking is expensive.

× You see because very be very popular because Those very peoples go to warm work.

✓ You see, bicycles are very popular because many people go to work by bike.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and noun phrase errors: 'Those very peoples' is incorrect—'people' is an uncountable plural noun and does not need 'those' or 'peoples'. 'Very be very popular' is ungrammatical: use the present tense with the verb 'to be' (are) to state a general fact. Also 'go to warm work' is likely a mistaken phrase; the intended meaning is probably commuting to work by bike, so use 'go to work by bike'. Suggestions: use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' as the subject, use 'are' for present plural, use 'many people' for plural humans, and use the prepositional phrase 'go to work by bike' to express transportation.