Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct but fuller answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details (age, how often you used it, a memory). Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. For example, I used to race my friends to the park, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: Expand your answer with specific reasons or examples: state your opinion, then give 1–2 supporting points (who uses bikes, where, or why they are popular). Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to make it coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters cycling to work, and in smaller towns families use bikes for leisure on weekends.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The response 'Yes.' is short but lacks an explicit verb and does not repeat the auxiliary from the question; in a question using past simple 'Did you have...', a full affirmative short answer should include the auxiliary 'did' plus the pronoun for clarity: 'Yes, I did.' This makes the tense and subject explicit. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, I did.' or a full sentence 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I think they are.

The reply 'Yes.' is acceptable in conversation but does not explicitly mirror the structure of the question 'Do you think bikes are popular...?' A clearer short answer includes the auxiliary 'do' and the clause 'they are' to show the opinion: 'Yes, I think they are.' Alternatively, a full answer would be 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' This makes the subject and tense clear. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I think they are.' or 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'