Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Antworten Sie direkt auf die Frage mit einem klaren Thema-Satz und fügen Sie ein oder zwei unterstützende Details hinzu. Vermeiden Sie das bloße Wiederholen der Frage. Verwenden Sie Möglichkeitswörter und Zeitangaben, z. B. wann Sie das Fahrrad hatten, wie oft Sie fuhren und wer Ihnen geholfen hat. Halten Sie die Antwort natürlich und nicht länger als fünf Sätze.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house. I rode it almost every afternoon with my friends, which helped me become confident and independent, and my father taught me how to balance and brake.

提案: Geben Sie eine direkte Meinung in einem Thema-Satz und stützen Sie diese mit konkreten Gründen oder Beispielen. Verwenden Sie Verbindungswörter (for example, because, therefore) und spezifische Details wie Anlässe, Orte oder Statistiken, falls bekannt. Vermeiden Sie das Wiederholen der Frage und bleiben Sie innerhalb von fünf Sätzen.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns. Many people use bicycles for short journeys because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities have dedicated cycle lanes which encourage cycling. For example, students often cycle to campus, while others choose bikes for exercise and to avoid traffic during rush hour.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeats the examiner's question, which is a sentence structure/pragmatic error rather than a grammatical form error. The appropriate answer should be a declarative sentence in the past tense. Use 'had' (past tense of 'have') to match 'when you were a child'. Provide a short affirmative or negative sentence (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'). Suggestion: Respond with a complete past-tense sentence using 'had' or the negative form 'didn't have' and include any brief detail if desired (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; it was a red bicycle.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. The correct response should be a present-tense declarative sentence matching the question's present simple form. Use 'think' (present simple) and 'are' for 'bikes' plural. If the student wants to disagree, use 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: Answer directly with a present simple sentence, and optionally add a reason (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for commuting.').