Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша відповідь неясна і не відповідає на питання. Потрібно давати чітке початкове речення про те, чи мав(ла) ви велосипед, а потім один-два уточнювальних деталі. Використовуйте прості слова й зв’язки (for example, when, because, so) щоб зробити відповідь зрозумілою та природною. Намагайтеся говорити не більше 4–5 речень і вимовляти слова чітко.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it nearly every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park. Because our neighborhood was quiet and safe, my parents allowed me to cycle alone. For example, I remember learning to ride on a small blue bike when I was six.

提案: Відповідь занадто коротка і містить помилку у словозупорядку. Потрібно почати з прямого твердження, потім додати принаймні одну конкретну причину або приклад, використовуючи зв’язки (because, for example, also). Це зробить відповідь більш природною й інформативною.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because traffic is heavy and parking is expensive. For example, in big cities you can see crowded bike lanes during rush hour, and some schools encourage children to cycle to save time.

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✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The original phrase appears to be unintelligible and does not form a grammatically correct English sentence. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because there is no clear subject, verb, or sensible meaning. Suggestion: use a simple past construction to answer the examiner's question about possession in childhood: 'I had a bicycle when I was a child.' This provides a clear subject (I), past-tense verb (had) and time reference (when I was a child).

× Yes, I think very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence omits the subject and verb for the clause describing what is popular, causing a sentence structure error (ID 26). To correct, explicitly name the subject ('bikes') and include the linking verb 'are' to form a complete clause: 'bikes are very popular.' Also place the adverb 'very' before the adjective 'popular.' Suggestion: when making opinions about a subject, include the subject and correct verb: 'I think bikes are very popular in my country.'