Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear direct response first, then add one or two concise supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. For example, say when you had the bike, why you stopped, and what you use now. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, so, since).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I stopped riding it around sixth grade because I began using a motorbike and public transport more often. Since then, I have mainly relied on personal motor transport for commuting.

提案: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific observations and reasons. Use linking words like because or for example, and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., motorcycles, scooters, two-wheelers). Avoid vague phrasing such as "so many" and reduce redundancy.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many families own at least one or two scooters or motorcycles because they are affordable and convenient for short trips and crowded streets.

× used to have a bike but I think it was still when I was I think I stopped using bike when I was since sixth grade and since then I have started using more personal transport.

✓ I used to have a bike, but I think I stopped riding it around sixth grade and since then I have started using more personal transport.

This sentence has multiple structure and tense problems (Grammar problem type ID 26). The original is missing the subject 'I' at the start, has redundant phrases ('I think' repeated), uses 'was' incorrectly, and mixes past and present tenses awkwardly. Corrected sentence adds the missing subject, removes repetition, uses 'stopped riding it around sixth grade' to express the past action, and uses present perfect 'have started' for a change that began in the past and continues now. Suggestions: always include a clear subject, avoid repeating filler phrases, place time expressions (e.g. 'around sixth grade') next to the verb they modify, and use consistent tenses (past for finished actions, present perfect for actions that continue to the present).

× Yeah, bikes are quite popular in the country and you can frequently see so many bikes on road and I would say for a family there would be around minimum two bikes to travel.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in the country; you can frequently see many bikes on the road, and I would say a family usually has at least two bikes for travel.

This sentence contains sentence structure and article/preposition issues (primary ID 26). Problems include informal 'Yeah', redundant 'so many', missing article 'the' before 'road', awkward quantifier order 'around minimum two', and incorrect verb phrase 'there would be' for possession. The corrected sentence replaces 'Yeah' with 'Yes', uses a semicolon and commas to join clauses properly, uses 'many' instead of 'so many', adds 'the' before 'road', and uses 'a family usually has at least two bikes' to express typical possession. Suggestions: choose appropriate formal responses, use articles with common nouns ('the road'), place quantifiers in correct order ('at least two'), and use present simple for general truths about popularity and typical possession.