Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó (nếu cần) bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lặp từ của câu hỏi; dùng thì phù hợp (quá khứ) và nếu bổ sung thông tin, hãy dùng từ nối như “and”, “because” hoặc “so”.

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to visit my friends. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to balance slowly and then rode without them after a few months.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại là lặp lại câu hỏi và có lỗi chính tả (‘buys’ thay vì ‘bikes’). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, nêu quan điểm rõ ràng (yes/no or I think...), cung cấp lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Sử dụng từ vựng liên quan như “commute”, “environmentally friendly”, “infrastructure”.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances, and cycling is seen as an environmentally friendly option. However, popularity varies between cities and rural areas because urban infrastructure supports cycling more.

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used 'buys' which is the plural of the verb 'buy' or the noun 'buy' meaning a purchase; this is a wrong word for the intended meaning. The correct word is 'bikes' (plural of 'bike'). This is not a grammatical tense or agreement error but a word-choice/spelling error. Suggestion: pay attention to similar-looking words and read the sentence aloud to check meaning; learn common confusable words and practice listening/reading to reinforce correct forms.