Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You did not answer this question. Give a direct response (yes/no or short phrase) followed by one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') if you add a reason. Limit your answer to no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood when I was six. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I rode it almost every day during summer. I remember feeling proud when I finally rode without the training wheels.

提案: You did not answer this question. Provide a clear opinion first (yes/no/partly) then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Use a linking word like 'because', 'for example' or 'however' to connect ideas. Keep the response natural, varied in vocabulary, and within five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and we often see office workers cycling to work in the morning. However, they are more common in urban areas than in rural regions where public transport or cars are used more.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The original response is empty; this is a sentence structure error because there is no verb or content. Provide a full sentence that fits the past tense the examiner used (Did you have...). Use 'had' for past possession and 'a bicycle' (singular) as a natural collocation. Suggestion: say 'I had a bicycle when I was a child.' to answer clearly.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

The original response is empty, which is a sentence structure error but also fails to use present simple to state general facts. The examiner asked 'Do you think...?' so reply in present tense. Use 'are' for plural 'bikes' and include an adverb like 'quite' if you want to qualify popularity. Suggestion: 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.' to express a general opinion in present simple.