Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子時態與語法錯誤較多，回答較冗長且缺乏連貫的分句結構。建議：1) 使用正確的過去時（例如: I had a bike / My father bought me a bike）。2) 開頭用一個明確的主題句回應問題，然後用一到兩個支持細節（時間、原因或感受）。3) 句子不要超過五句，使用連接詞如 because 或 when 來組織信息。具體練習：把現在的複句拆成清晰的短句，並注意動詞時態一致。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a birthday present when I was six, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

提案: 內容不夠具體且有語法、詞彙和表達不清問題。建議：1) 明確使用正確的時態與短語（例如 in the past / in the 1990s）。2) 提供具體原因或例子來支持觀點（如城市交通、環保、共享單車）。3) 使用連接詞（for example, because, however）使句子更連貫。4) 注意詞序與冠詞用法（e.g., many people, the 1990s）。

例: Yes, bikes are still very popular in China. In the 1990s many people used bicycles as their main transport, and today shared bikes and cycling for exercise keep them common in many cities.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a kid my father brought me the bike as a birthday gift when I was six.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid. My father gave me the bike as a birthday gift when I was six.

问题类型：现在时与过去时混用（应使用过去时）。说明：原句中 “do have” 是现在时，而后半句描述的是过去发生的事情（“when I was a kid”/“when I was six”），时态不一致且应使用一般过去时。另外句子过长且缺少标点，应分成两句以提高清晰度。建议：把“do have”改为过去式“had”，把“brought me”改为更常用的“gave me”，并在两部分之间添加句号分开。

× I think bikes are quite popular in China because back to nineteen ages every people travel by bike and after that old kids learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in China because in the past people in their teens all traveled by bike, and later children learned how to ride a bike.

问题类型：过去时/时间表达错误和词语搭配不当。说明：原句“back to nineteen ages” 用法不正确，应改为“in the past”或具体年代；“every people” 语法错误，应为“people”或“every person”；“travel by bike” 在过去应使用过去时“traveled”; “old kids” 用法不当，意思应为“later children”或“older children”，且与时间顺序连词需要处理。建议：用“in the past”替换不自然的时间表达，使用复数名词“people”，把动词改为过去时“traveled”，并将“old kids”改为“later children”或“older children”，同时用逗号或连词分隔句子以增强可读性。