Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply echoed the examiner's question and did not answer. To improve, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (e.g., who bought it, how often you used it, a short memory). Use linking words like “and” or “because” only if needed. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I rode it every day after school. I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels because I wanted to join my friends for weekend rides.

提案: Your answer gives a short opinion but is informal and vague. Improve by giving a clearer topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, bikes are quite popular”), then add a specific reason or example and a linking word to make it coherent. Use slightly more formal vocabulary (e.g., “widespread” or “common”) and avoid filler phrases like “kind of.” Keep to 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, most children learn to ride early, and in cities you can see many people commuting by bike to work or school.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26). Provide a direct answer appropriate to the past tense question: use 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.' Suggestion: listen to the question and answer with a complete sentence that matches the tense (past simple).

× Yeah kind of everyone learns how to ride a bike when they're a child.

✓ Yeah, kind of — everyone learned how to ride a bike when they were a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('learns') with a past-time clause ('when they're a child'), which is inconsistent. The question asks about general popularity now, but the clause refers to childhood (past). Use past simple for completed past actions: 'learned' and use past pronoun form 'they were'. Also add punctuation and a comma after 'Yeah' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure tense consistency between main clause and time clauses; match pronoun verb forms (past with past).