Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address the question. Give a direct response (yes/no or brief statement) and then add one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, max 4–5 sentences, and use linking words if you add details (for example: because, so, when).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and to the beach because we lived near the sea. Riding my bike helped me feel independent and it was also a fun way to play with my friends on weekends.

提案: This answer is relevant and mostly well structured: direct response plus supporting details. To improve, add a linking word to connect ideas and include a specific statistic, example or brief comparison to make it more concrete. Keep answers concise (3–4 sentences) and use varied vocabulary (e.g., commute, eco-friendly, recreational).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people cycle to work because it is cheap, healthy, and often faster in busy cities. For example, my neighbor cycles five kilometers to his office every day, and I like to ride to the park on weekends for exercise and relaxation.

× I live in a small city near the sea.

✓ I lived in a small city near the sea.

The examiner asked about the student's childhood (past time). Using the present simple 'I live' conflicts with the past context. Change to the past simple 'I lived' to match the time frame of 'when you were a child'.

× I enjoy reading books and walking in the park with my friends.

✓ I enjoyed reading books and walking in the park with my friends.

The sentence describes activities in childhood, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Change 'enjoy' to 'enjoyed' to match the past time reference.

× Learning English helps me meet new people and understand different cultures.

✓ Learning English helped me meet new people and understand different cultures.

Because the student is describing past experiences as a child, verbs should be in the past tense. Change 'helps' to 'helped' to agree with the past context given by the examiner's question.