Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short, unclear, and does not address the question. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., when you got it, who gave it to you, how often you rode it, or a brief memory). Use linking words like “because” or “and” to connect ideas. Keep answers natural and no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because the area was quiet, I felt confident practicing new tricks, and my friends and I would often race on weekends.

提案: The reply is not relevant to the question and gives no information. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no/quite popular) and then support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., commuting habits, availability of bike lanes, climate, cultural trends). Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “however” to make the response coherent.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have invested in bike lanes and sharing schemes, so students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic and save money.

× Innocent.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student reply 'Innocent.' is not a grammatically complete response to the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' This is a sentence structure error (no subject or verb, unrelated word). Provide a full sentence that matches the past simple question: include subject 'I', past tense verb 'had', and the object 'a bike'. If the student means to say they did not have one, use 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Practice forming full responses to yes/no questions using the correct auxiliary for past simple (did/didn't) and a base verb or past tense as appropriate.

× Saw.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The single word 'Saw.' does not answer the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' It lacks subject, verb, and clear meaning, so it is a sentence structure error. The question is in present simple, so form the answer in present simple as well (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular here.'). Ensure responses include a subject and verb and match the tense of the question.