Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a direct answer (yes/no or brief statement) followed by one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. I loved riding it to the park every weekend because it gave me freedom and helped me learn balance, so I became more confident outdoors.

提案: You repeated and misheard the examiner’s question and changed a key word, which made your reply irrelevant. First, answer the actual question directly (e.g., 'Yes, I think...'), then give specific reasons and use linking words such as 'because', 'for example', or 'however'. Keep responses natural and avoid repeating the question verbatim.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see bike lanes and shared bikes, so cycling has become more common in recent years.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error: the response should be a short answer using the correct past tense auxiliary 'did' plus subject and base verb (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't'). Suggestion: respond directly to yes/no questions with 'Yes/No' and the appropriate auxiliary followed by the base verb (if adding the verb), e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't have one.'

× Do you think baggies are popular in your country

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'baggies' instead of 'bikes', which appears to be a wrong word choice (lexical error) rather than grammar; this makes the answer irrelevant to the question. Also the sentence lacks a question mark and the verb form is correct for present tense general question. Suggestion: use the correct noun that matches the question ('bikes') and include proper punctuation. If answering rather than repeating, reply with a complete sentence like 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'