Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one or two concise supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Focus on chronology (when you had it), frequency (how often you used it) and purpose (why you used it). Use simple past tense for past habits and avoid repeating fragments.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I usually rode it to school and to the park on weekends. Because it was close to my home, I often rode it with my friends, which helped me stay active and have fun.

提案: Start with a direct opinion (yes/no/partly), then support it with reasons and a specific example. Use present simple for general facts and include linking words (because/for example/also). Make sure sentences are complete and avoid leaving words unfinished.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and avoid traffic. For example, cities have added bike lanes and rental schemes, so more commuters choose cycling for convenience and exercise.

× Do you have I'm just back for go to school.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to go to school.

The original is ungrammatical and mixes tenses and fragments. The question asks about past possession, so use past tense 'had'. 'I'm just back for go to school' attempts present continuous and an infinitive incorrectly. Replace with a clear past-tense statement: 'I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to go to school.' This fixes verb forms and sentence structure. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the question (past). Use complete clauses with subject + past verb (I had; I used).

× I usually I.

✓ I usually rode it.

The fragment 'I usually I.' lacks a main verb and an object. The speaker likely means they usually rode the bike, so use past tense 'rode' and include the object 'it' (referring to the bike). Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb. Suggestion: Complete the clause: subject + past verb + object when describing habitual past actions ('I usually rode it').

× My bike go, I went to the park.

✓ I would ride my bike to the park.

'My bike go' is incorrect: 'go' is base form and doesn't match the intended past habitual meaning. 'I went to the park' is past simple but disconnected. Use 'would ride' or 'I rode my bike to the park' to express habitual past action. Past participle is not required here; use past simple 'rode' or modal 'would' for habitual past. Suggestion: For habitual past, use 'would' + base verb or past simple ('I would ride my bike to the park' or 'I rode my bike to the park').

× Currently more people use a bicycle for go to the work.

✓ Currently, more people use bicycles to go to work.

Errors: 'use a bicycle' is acceptable but 'bicycles' as plural matches 'more people'; 'for go to the work' is incorrect preposition and article use. Use 'to go to work' (no article) and plural 'bicycles' or 'a bicycle' consistently. Also add a comma after 'Currently' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'use bicycles' or 'use a bicycle' consistently and 'to go to work' for purpose of movement.

× So people prefer just by

✓ So people just prefer bikes.

The fragment 'prefer just by' misuses preposition 'by' and is incomplete. Likely intended: 'people just prefer bikes' or 'people prefer to cycle.' Replace with a complete clause using correct verb and object. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + noun ('prefer bikes') or 'prefer to' + verb ('prefer to cycle').