Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Hai risposto con una domanda invece di rispondere direttamente; devi iniziare con una frase che risponda chiaramente alla domanda e poi aggiungere brevi dettagli. Evita ripetizioni e mantieni al massimo 3–4 frasi. Usa parole semplici ma pertinenti (ad esempio: own, ride, often, learned, friend).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was six and used to cycle to my friend’s house every weekend. It helped me feel independent and made outdoor play more fun.

提案: Hai dato una risposta chiara ma lunga e poco organizzata; migliora usando una frase di tesi seguita da due motivi collegati con connettivi come 'because' o 'however'. Specifica esempi concreti (ad esempio: lack of bike lanes, heavy traffic, long distances) e cerca frasi più scorrevoli e corrette grammaticalmente.

例: Not really. Bikes are uncommon because most roads are busy and there are few dedicated bike lanes. Also, shops and services are spread out, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience.

× Did you ever bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated the examiner's past-tense question but changed the structure to 'Did you ever bike', which is a different meaning: it asks whether the student rode a bike (action) rather than whether they owned one (possession). Also, 'bike' used as a verb is acceptable but less appropriate here because the examiner asked about having/owning a bike. Use the past simple 'Did you have' to match the examiner's intended question about possession. Suggestion: Use 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' for asking about possession, or 'Did you ever ride a bike when you were a child?' for asking about the activity.

× No because in my country roads are very dangerous and the areas where bikes can go are very little and distance between shops is huge.

✓ No, because in my country the roads are very dangerous, the areas where bikes can go are very small, and the distances between shops are huge.

Multiple issues: missing comma after 'No'; missing definite article before 'roads' (use 'the roads'); 'the areas ... are very little' is incorrect: 'little' is an adjective that does not fit countable plural 'areas'—use 'very small' or 'very limited'. Also 'distance between shops' should be plural 'distances between shops'. Parallel structure requires commas and 'and' before the last item. Suggestion: Break into clearer phrases and use correct articles, plural forms, and adjective choice: 'No, because in my country the roads are very dangerous, the areas where bikes can go are very small, and the distances between shops are huge.'