Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не по существу и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь прямо отвечать на вопрос, использовать простое прошлое для описания прошлого (или настоящее, если это актуально), избегать лишней информации и строить связные предложения с логическими связками. Также исправьте базовые ошибки согласования времен и артиклей.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents preferred me to walk or use public transport, so I never learned to ride. As a result, I still don't feel confident cycling now.

提案: Ответ по существу, но есть ошибки в грамматике, словосочетаниях и связности. Улучшите согласование существительных и глаголов, используйте связующие слова для перечисления причин и давайте немного более конкретные примеры. Также избегайте словоформ вроде "bike sign" — вероятно, вы имели в виду "bicycles" или "bike lanes".

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. I often see students and commuters cycling because bikes are inexpensive and help avoid traffic jams. Moreover, many cities have bike lanes, which makes cycling safer and a convenient way to exercise.

× Actually, I'm a child right now and I sing.

✓ Actually, I was a child then and I had a bike.

The student used present tense 'I'm' and 'I sing' but the examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'). Use past tense to match the question: 'I was a child then' and 'I had a bike' (if correcting to a coherent past answer). Use 'had' for possession in past. Suggestion: pay attention to time markers and choose past tense verbs for past situations.

× After that I don't buy a bike.

✓ After that I didn't buy a bike.

The sentence mixes narrative of the past with present simple 'don't buy'. Use past simple 'didn't buy' to describe an action that did not happen in the past. Also consider clarifying sequence: 'After that, I didn't buy a bike.'

× Because I don't like bike or cars and ask.

✓ Because I didn't like bikes or cars and didn't ask for one.

Pronoun and noun number errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally; 'cars' is fine. The clause 'and ask' is incomplete and unclear. Use past simple negative 'didn't like' and 'didn't ask for one' to show you did not request a bike. Suggestion: complete verbs and match tense and number.

× I think bicycle are quite popular in my country because I often see many people cycling, especially students and commuters.

✓ I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because I often see many people cycling, especially students and commuters.

Subject-verb agreement and count noun issue: 'bicycle' (singular) does not agree with 'are'. Use plural 'bicycles' when using 'are'. Keep present simple 'think' to answer general fact. Suggestion: use plural form for general statements about more than one item.

× They prefer bike sign, is cheap, helps avoid traffic jams and is good exercise.

✓ They prefer bikes because they are cheap, help avoid traffic jams and are good exercise.

The original is fragmented and lacks proper connectors and subject-verb agreement. 'They prefer bike sign' is unclear; likely meant 'They prefer bikes'. Use conjunction 'because' to link reason, and ensure verbs agree with plural subject: 'are cheap', 'help avoid', 'are good exercise'. Suggestion: combine ideas into one coherent sentence and match plural forms.