Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğrudan soruyu yanıtlamıyor; aynı soruyu tekrarlamak yerine kişisel bir cevap vermelisiniz. Ayrıca, kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurup ardından bir veya iki destekleyici detay eklemelisiniz. Bağlaçlar (ör. "and", "but", "because", "so") kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı hale getirin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used it every day to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Cevabınız görüş belirtiyor ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var; ayrıca daha spesifik örnekler ve bir bağlaçla destek sunmalısınız. "Maybe no" yerine net bir ifade kullanın (ör. "Not really" veya "I don't think so"). "Macar bikes" ifadesi muğlak; ne demek istediğinizi açıklayın (ör. kiralık bisikletler). Kısa ve mantıklı ek cümlelerle sebep ve örnek verin.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or public transport, and bicycles are mainly used for leisure in parks or by a small number of hobby cyclists.

× Maybe no because my country people usually use the Macar bikes so much only in the park. Yeah, like that.

✓ Maybe not, because people in my country usually use Macar bikes only in parks.

The original sentence misuses 'no' as a response and has incorrect word order and pronoun placement. Use 'Maybe not' for a tentative negative. 'My country people' is not natural; use 'people in my country'. 'So much only in the park' has wrong adverb placement and number agreement; 'only in parks' is correct and more general. Improve by placing adverbs and modifiers close to the words they modify and using natural noun phrases ('people in my country').