Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a direct topic sentence that states whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit friends in my neighborhood. However, I rarely used it once I started school because my parents preferred to drive me, and the roads nearby felt unsafe for cycling.

提案: The content is relevant and includes reasons, which is good. Improve coherence by correcting small errors (e.g., 'rise' → 'ride'), use a clear topic sentence, and add a linking word to connect reasons. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., 'motorbikes' → 'motorcycles' or 'scooters') and avoid minor grammar mistakes to raise the score.

例: No, bikes are not very popular in my city. Mainly, people prefer cars or motorcycles for commuting because they are faster and more convenient; moreover, poor road conditions and a lack of bike lanes discourage cycling, so only a small number of people ride regularly.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The original response repeats the examiner's question and lacks a proper answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a direct answer using correct past tense: 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't'. If adding detail, use a complete sentence: 'Yes, I did; I had a bike when I was about eight.'

× No, bikes aren't very popular where I live. Most people prefer car or motorbikes because they are more convenient for commuting, and cycling is discouraged by poor road conditions and a lack of bike lanes, so very few people rise regularly.

✓ No, bikes aren't very popular where I live. Most people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient for commuting, and cycling is discouraged by poor road conditions and a lack of bike lanes, so very few people ride regularly.

There are two errors here: 'car' should be plural 'cars' to match 'most people prefer' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1) and 'rise' is the wrong verb; the intended verb is 'ride' (Sentence structure error / incorrect verb choice, ID 26). Also 'motorbikes' is fine. Correction: use plural 'cars' for consistency and 'ride' for cycling. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree in number with their subjects and use the correct verb for the action (ride a bike).