Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答与考官问题没有直接相关，内容偏离主题且缺乏信息。请直接回答问题（有或没有），然后用1–2句补充具体细节（例如谁借给你的、骑车的频率、最喜欢的骑车经历等），并使用连接词使表达连贯。保持答案自然、简短（不超过5句）。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I felt safe and confident to ride on my own.

提案: 你的回答没有回应问题，内容跑题且不具体。请先明确表达观点（例如“是的/不太”），然后用一两句给出原因和具体例子（比如城市自行车道的数量、环保意识或通勤使用情况），并用连接词如“because/for example/also”来组织句子。控制在最多5句内。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and cities have been adding bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Go to call back when you were upset.

✓ I used to cry/call for help when I was upset.

原句“Go to call back when you were upset.” 句子结构混乱，不符合英语表达习惯（属于句子结构错误）。可能说话者想表达“当我难过/生气时，会哭/求助”等意思。建议根据想表达的具体含义选择合适的动词： - 若想表达“会哭”，可改为“I used to cry when I was upset.”（过去常态） - 若想表达“会去找人帮忙/呼喊求助”，可改为“I used to call for help when I was upset.” 另外注意时态一致性，题目是询问过去是否有自行车，应回答与过去有关的事实；如果想陈述过去的习惯，用“used to + 动词”。

× Touristic parks are popular in your country.

✓ Are tourist parks popular in your country? / Tourist parks are popular in my country.

原句“Touristic parks are popular in your country.” 句式不合语境并且信息指向错误（属于句子结构错误）。考官问的是“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?” 学生应回答与该问题相关的内容。若要反问考官，应使用疑问句形式："Are tourist parks popular in your country?" 若要陈述本国情况，应说"Tourist parks are popular in my country."另外，形容词“touristic”不如“tourist”常用，建议使用“tourist parks”。