Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who taught you, and a brief comment about learning). Use correct verb tenses and linking words (e.g., "when", "and", "but"). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. My mother taught me how to ride it, and at first I found it quite difficult. However, after practising for a few weeks I became confident and enjoyed cycling around the neighbourhood.

提案: Answer directly and provide clearer, more specific supporting details. Use correct grammar and precise time references (e.g., "in recent years" or "about ten years ago") and connect ideas with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid fillers like "umm". Keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In recent years, especially since about ten years ago, many shared-bike schemes have been introduced in cities, which has made cycling more convenient and widespread.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was about 7 years old start at that time and is my mom taught me how to write it and at the 1st I have tough right in it but.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was about 7 years old. My mom taught me how to ride it, and at first I found it difficult.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: the sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time phrase 'when I was about 7 years old' so use past 'had'. 'start at that time' is ungrammatical and unnecessary; replace with a simple past narrative. 'is my mom taught me' uses wrong verb and extra 'is' — use past 'My mom taught me'. 'write' is incorrect verb; context requires 'ride'. 'at the 1st I have tough right in it but' includes incorrect ordinal and words: use 'at first I found it difficult'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently for past events, choose correct verbs (ride, teach), and simplify into clear sentences. Errors mapped to ID 6 (Present tense issue) and also 5 (Past tense issue) and 8 (Verb + -ing) could apply, but primary error is using present instead of past, so categorized as Present tense issue.

× I would say yes, it is popular in my country and for recent year, about 10 years ago, umm, we have a lot of shared bike that we can use in the city.

✓ I would say yes, bikes are popular in my country, and in recent years, since about 10 years ago, we have had a lot of shared bikes that we can use in the city.

Tense and agreement problems: 'it is popular' uses singular 'it' incorrectly — use plural 'bikes are'. 'for recent year, about 10 years ago' mixes time references; use 'in recent years' and 'since about 10 years ago' to indicate a period starting in the past. 'we have a lot of shared bike' has number agreement and article errors — use plural 'shared bikes'. Also change 'we have' to present perfect 'we have had' to show a situation continuing from the past to present. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number, use consistent time expressions, and use present perfect when describing actions or states that started in the past and continue now.