Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接但不够自然且有语法小错误。应该用正确时态和更自然的表达，并稍微扩展理由以显得完整。例如说明父母是否允许、经济原因或兴趣等。同时注意句子数不超过五句并使用连接词。

例: No, I didn't. When I was a child I wasn't confident riding a bike because my balance was poor, so my parents didn’t buy one for me. As a result, I preferred walking or taking the bus to places near my home.

提案: 回答内容相关且有观察，但表达可以更地道并更具体。用更自然的时态和搭配（e.g., “go to work”），并加入连接词或数量/场景细节来丰富答案（比如通勤高峰、共享单车）。注意保持简洁不冗长。

例: Yes, definitely. I often see many people cycling when I commute to work or school, especially during rush hour. In recent years shared bicycles have become very common, which makes cycling a convenient option for short trips.

× No, I didn't because my balance is not very well.

✓ No, I didn't because my balance was not very good.

错误类型：使用了副词“well”修饰名词“balance”，应使用形容词；同时句子时态应与提问（过去）一致，使用过去时。改正建议：用形容词“good”来描述名词，且把现在时“is”改为过去时“was”，形成“my balance was not very good”。另外也可更地道地说成“I didn't have good balance”或“I wasn't very good at balancing”。

× When I go to school or go work, I can see so many people ride bikes on the road.

✓ When I go to school or to work, I can see so many people riding bikes on the road.

错误类型：动词并列与动名词形式使用不当；缺少介词“to”搭配“work”。改正建议：并列动词结构中保持一致性，用动名词“riding”表示正在进行的动作；在“go to work”前加上介词“to”。也可将句子改为现在习惯性事实的表达：“When I go to school or to work, I see many people riding bikes on the road.”。