Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a short topic sentence and then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and avoid repetition. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention who gave it or how you used it, and add a brief reason or memory.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends. Because our neighborhood was safe and close-knit, I rode it almost every day, which helped me become confident and independent.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is informal and contains grammar errors and redundancy. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, then add 2 specific supporting points (use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example'), and avoid vague phrases. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g. 'electric bicycles', 'affordable', 'widely used'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes — especially electric bicycles — are very popular in my country. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, so many people use them for commuting. For example, commuters prefer e-bikes because they are faster than regular bikes and much cheaper than cars or motorcycles.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

This repeated line is a repetition of the examiner's question by the student; grammatically it is correct but is a conversational repetition rather than an answer. No grammatical correction is needed; to improve, the student should answer directly (e.g. 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't').

× Yes, I think so not only bikes but like electric bikes are very popular back in my country.

✓ Yes, I think so. Not only regular bikes but also electric bikes are very popular in my country.

Problems: sentence run-on and incorrect connector use. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Split into two sentences and use parallel structure: 'Not only A but also B'. Replace 'back in my country' with 'in my country' for present relevance. Suggestion: use punctuation to separate ideas and maintain parallel phrasing.

× It's very convenient and easy to use, right?

✓ They are very convenient and easy to use, right?

Issue: pronoun reference and agreement—'It' refers to 'bikes' (plural). This is an 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' / pronoun agreement problem (ID 13/12); here we classify as ID 13 per instructions. Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural noun. Also keep tag question 'right?' for confirmation.

× Any people have know how to ride a bike or ride an electric bike and it's faster and it's cheap compared to a car or motorcycle.

✓ Many people know how to ride a bike or an electric bike, and they are faster and cheaper than a car or a motorcycle.

Problems: incorrect quantifier 'Any people', wrong verb tense/auxiliary 'have know', awkward coordination and pronoun/reference errors—classed as 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Corrections: use 'Many people' or 'Most people'; use simple present 'know'; add article 'an electric bike'; use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to bikes; use comparative form 'faster and cheaper than' and include articles before 'car'/'motorcycle'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb form simple and ensure pronoun agreement and correct comparatives.