Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer repeated the examiner's question and included a pronunciation/spelling error (“buy” instead of “bike”). In Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Focus on giving a clear statement about whether you had a bike, use correct words, and keep it natural and concise. For improvement: (1) Practice listening carefully to the question and correcting misheard words immediately. (2) Start with a direct answer (Yes/No or short statement), then add one or two specific details using linking words like “when” or “because.” (3) Keep responses under five sentences and avoid repeating the question.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used it to ride to school and to visit my friends. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I learned to ride very quickly.

提案: Your response turned the examiner’s question back into a question and did not provide your own opinion. In Part 1 you must give a direct personal answer and then support it. For improvement: (1) Give a clear opinion sentence (e.g., “Yes, I think…” or “No, I don’t think…”). (2) Support your opinion with specific reasons or examples, using linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “however.” (3) Avoid asking rhetorical questions; speak assertively and naturally.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters cycling to work, and at weekends families go to parks for bike rides.

× Did you have a buy when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'buy' (a verb) instead of the noun 'bike'. This is a wrong word choice (incorrect use of pronouns/words). Replace 'buy' with the correct noun 'bike' to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: listen for minimal pairs and practice common nouns to avoid mishearing or typographical errors.

× Don't you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country./No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question as a negative question ('Don't you think...') which changes meaning and is not an answer. This is a sentence structure error: responses to yes/no questions should be answers, not another question. Provide a direct answer that fits context and tense. Suggestion: answer with a short response plus a brief explanation (e.g., 'Yes, I think so because...').