Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, grammatically correct response with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Fix tense and vocabulary (bike, not Bible). Use linking words if adding details. Keep it concise (<=5 sentences). For example, say whether you had a bike, mention when or why, and add a brief memory or reason.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight years old and used it to cycle to my friend’s house every weekend. Because it was light and easy to ride, I learned to ride confidently within a few days.

提案: Answer directly and then support your opinion with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., 'cars are more popular now' not 'by car populars') and be specific about popularity (who uses them, where). Keep to 1–3 sentences with clear connectors like 'because' or 'however'.

例: Yes, bikes are still popular in some areas, but cars are more common in cities now. For example, many people in rural areas and students use bikes because they are cheap and easy to maintain.

× As I do have Bible when I used to a child a child.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The original sentence has multiple structure and word-choice problems: incorrect auxiliary 'do' with 'have', wrong noun 'Bible' instead of 'bike' (likely intended 'bike' or 'bicycle'), incorrect use of 'used to' and duplicated 'a child'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correction uses simple past 'had' to match the examiner's past-tense question and the correct noun 'bicycle'. Suggestion: use 'I had' for possession in the past and 'when I was a child' for time reference.

× Yes, by car populars now and then.

✓ Yes, cars are more popular now than before.

The original sentence misuses word order and pluralization: 'populars' is not a noun and 'by car' is unclear. This is a subject-verb agreement / word-form and sentence structure issue (ID 27). The correction uses plural noun 'cars' and the verb 'are' to agree with the plural subject and clarifies the comparison 'more popular now than before' to express change over time. Suggestion: use 'cars are' for plural subjects and 'more popular than' to compare.

× They're very easy to use.

✓ Bicycles are very easy to use.

The original sentence uses the pronoun 'They' without a clear antecedent in the student's reply; in context it likely refers to bicycles. This is a sentence structure/clarity issue (ID 26). The correction names 'Bicycles' explicitly to make the subject clear and fits present-tense general statement. Suggestion: when responding, explicitly name the subject if the reference might be unclear.