Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not answer. To improve, always respond directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No or short statement), then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and no more than 5 sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention an age or memory, and link reasons or feelings with words like “because” or “so.”

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven, and I remember practicing in the park near my house because my parents wanted me to learn to be independent. As a result, I could ride confidently by the time I started school.

提案: You again repeated the examiner’s question and provided no content. Improve by giving a direct opinion (Yes/No/It depends) followed by 1–3 specific supporting details and linking words (e.g., “however,” “because,” “for example”). Mention who uses bikes, reasons for popularity, or differences between cities and rural areas to add concrete content. Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bikes are cheaper than cars. However, in rural areas they are less common since distances are longer and public transport is limited.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatics issue: the response should be a statement answering the yes/no question, not a repetition. Improve by answering directly (Yes/No) and then expanding. For example: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question rather than providing an answer. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error: respond with a statement expressing opinion. Improve by replying directly and adding a brief reason: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.'