Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit short and slightly repetitive ("bike" repeated). To improve: start with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector, and avoid repeating the same word. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., bicycle, learned to cycle) and keep it within 3–5 sentences.

例: Yes, I did — I owned a small bicycle as a child. I learned to cycle when I was about 12, and I remember practicing every afternoon until I felt confident. Because I rode it to school and to visit friends, it became my main way to get around.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors, unclear phrasing and awkward word order. To improve: give a clear topic sentence, use linking words (for example, "because" or "for instance") and provide a specific reason or example. Correct grammar ("there are lots of public bikes" / "they serve citizens") and use concise sentences (2–4 sentences).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Taiwan, especially in Taipei. For example, the city has many public bike-share stations and dedicated bike lanes, so many people use bikes for short trips and commuting. As a result, cycling is a convenient and common way to get around the city.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I learned how to ride a bike when I was 12 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it when I was 12 years old.

The original sentence mostly uses past tense correctly but is wordy and repeats 'a bike.' Replace 'learned how to ride a bike' with 'learned to ride it' for conciseness and naturalness while keeping past tense consistent.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I live in Taiwan and in Taipei there are lots of. You bike which can serve every citizens lives in Taipei and lots of people.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I live in Taiwan, and in Taipei there are lots of shared bikes that serve many citizens' daily lives.

The original contains sentence fragments, incorrect word order, and incorrect noun phrases. 'There are lots of.' is a fragment missing a noun. 'You bike which can serve every citizens lives in Taipei and lots of people' has incorrect pronoun 'you,' wrong pluralization 'citizens lives,' and awkward structure. Correct by using 'shared bikes' as the noun, 'serve many citizens' daily lives' for correct possessive and natural phrasing. Maintain present simple tense for general facts.