Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有时态与细节错误。应直接用过去时描述拥有情况，并补充一两句具体细节（例如自行车类型、用途或记忆），同时控制在不超过5句内。可以使用连接词如 "and" 或 "which" 来衔接信息。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with a rack bag on the back, which I used to carry my school books. I learned to ride it when I was six and rode it to a friend’s house almost every weekend.

提案: 回答含义不清且有用词错误（"waning" 应为 "carrying" 或其他），缺乏具体支持细节。应说明为什么流行（如环保、交通拥堵、健身）并给出观察到的例子，使用连接词如 "because" 或 "for example"。

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are very popular because they are cheap and practical for short trips. For example, I often see commuters carrying bags on their bikes and students riding to school during rush hour.

× I have a rack bag.

✓ I had a rack bag.

此处上下文为过去时（考官问的是“when you were a child?”），句子应使用过去时态来与问题保持一致。将现在时的 have 改为过去时 had。建议：回答与过去时间点相关的问题时，动词要用过去时。

× I always see people waning bags across the streets.

✓ I always see people wearing bags across the streets.

原句中单词 waning 拼写错误，应为 wearing（现在分词，表示“穿着/背着”）。另外，时态与“always see”搭配使用现在分词是可以的，但应确保动词拼写正确。建议：注意常见动词的拼写，wear 的现在分词为 wearing。