Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите повторения и сделайте ответ более естественным и расширьте ответ конкретной информацией. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два предложения с подробностями (например, почему у вас не было велосипеда и чем вы тогда занимались). Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов слов.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school and sometimes borrowed a neighbour’s bike on weekends.

提案: Уберите повторение слова и добавьте конкретные причины или примеры, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным. Начните с короткого утверждения, затем используйте связку (for example, because, so) и приведите причину или пример. Постарайтесь уложиться в до 3–4 предложений.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people cycle to work to avoid traffic, and there are also bike-sharing schemes in several large towns.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence contains a repetition 'when I' causing a sentence structure error and disrupting readability. Remove the duplicated phrase to form a correct past-tense negative statement that matches the examiner's question. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch repeated words and keep the past tense 'didn't have' consistent with the time reference.

× Yes, I think bikes are really popular popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country.

There is an inadvertent repetition of the adjective 'popular', which is a sentence structure/word repetition error. Remove the duplicated word so the sentence reads fluently. Suggestion: proofread or pause briefly after speaking to avoid repeating words and maintain natural flow.