Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain with one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (use 'ride a bike' and past tense reasons). Avoid redundancy.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of falling. As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school.

提案: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words. Fix grammar (use 'people', 'live', 'have'). Be specific about reasons and give an example or comparison rather than repeating phrases.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. For example, many commuters and students prefer motorbikes because they are cheap and convenient in heavy traffic, so a large proportion of households own at least one.

× No, I didn't ride bike because I was scared to ride.

✓ No, I didn't ride a bike because I was scared to.

The original sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'bike' and repeats 'to ride' unnecessarily. Use 'ride a bike' and omit the second 'to ride' because 'scared to' is acceptable in informal speech but better is 'scared to' followed by a verb; here 'scared to' can stand alone when the verb was already stated. Also ensure article use with countable nouns.

× Yes, because I am living in India, most peoples are using bikes to go to their school, college as even for their jobs.

✓ Yes, because I live in India, most people use bikes to go to school, to college, or even to work.

Use simple present 'I live' for habitual/state facts rather than 'I am living'. 'Peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'people'. Replace continuous 'are using' with simple present 'use' for habitual action. 'their school, college' is better as 'school, college' without possessive when speaking generally. 'for their jobs' -> 'to work' is more natural.

× So it's widely available and everyone have that and everybody, almost everybody knows how to ride a bike.

✓ So they're widely available, and everyone has one; almost everybody knows how to ride a bike.

'It' is incorrect when referring to plural 'bikes' — use 'they' and plural verb 'are'. 'Available' should agree in number. 'Everyone have' is wrong: 'everyone' is singular and requires 'has'. Clarify reference by saying 'one' for possession. Keep 'almost everybody knows' which is correct.