Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша відповідь просто повторює питання замість того, щоб на нього відповідати. Щоб підвищити бал, дайте пряму відповідь (так/ні або пояснення), додайте коротке пояснення або опис, використайте зв’язки між реченнями і конкретні деталі (наприклад, вік, як часто їздили, з ким, де). Обмежтеся не більше ніж 5 реченнями, уникайте повторів і використовуйте природну мову.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I used to ride it around the neighbourhood every afternoon. My parents taught me, and I remember practicing until I could ride without help. Riding a bike was my favourite way to play outdoors.

提案: Відповіді типу «I don't know» виглядають невпевнено і не дають співрозмовнику інформації. Краще висловити свою думку навіть якщо ви не впевнені, і підкріпити її однією-двома причинами або прикладом. Використайте зв’язки (for example, because, however) і конкретні деталі про те, де або серед яких груп людей велосипеди популярні.

例: I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities and among students, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to run errands, and there are several bike lanes in the city centre that make cycling easier.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/communication error (ID 26). The expected reply should directly answer the past-tense question using 'did' for short answer or a full sentence in past tense. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did.' for a short answer, or 'I had a bike when I was a child.' for a full sentence to show tense and clarity.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know. I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

The student's short answer 'I don't know' is grammatically correct but does not fully address the examiner's question about current popularity; this is a sentence structure/pragmatic issue (ID 26). The examiner asks about present opinion, so a present-tense response is expected. Suggestion: expand the answer using present simple, e.g. 'I think bikes are quite popular in my country.' or 'I'm not sure, but I think they are becoming more popular.'