Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ตอบควรใช้อดีตกาลและให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มขึ้น เช่น บอกว่าเมื่อไหร่ ได้รับจากใคร หรือชอบขี่อย่างไร เพื่อความเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจน ใช้ linking word หากให้รายละเอียดเสริม เช่น "because" หรือ "so".

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it to visit my friends every afternoon because our neighborhood was safe and quiet.

提案: ประโยคควรชัดเจนทางไวยากรณ์และให้เหตุผลเฉพาะเจาะจง มากกว่าพูดทั่วไป แก้ไวยากรณ์ (เช่น 'my me' ผิด) และใช้ linking word ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'for example' เพื่ออธิบายให้เป็นธรรมชาติและมีเนื้อหามากขึ้น.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many families own at least one. For example, when I was growing up almost every household on my street had a bicycle, so children often rode to school and parks.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the student must use past tense. Using present tense 'have' is inconsistent. Use past simple 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: pay attention to time markers like 'when you were a child' and change present tense verbs to past tense.

× Yes, I think that because my me and my friends had a bicycle in every house.

✓ Yes, I think so because my friends and I had a bicycle in every house.

Multiple issues apply but per instructions only types from the list: main issues are sentence structure and pronoun order. The phrase 'my me and my friends' is ungrammatical; correct order is 'my friends and I'. Also 'I think that because' is awkward; 'I think so because' or 'I think that because' can be improved to 'I think so because' to connect the idea. Maintain past tense 'had' to match 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: use 'my friends and I' for subject coordination and ensure clause connectors ('so' or 'that') are used appropriately.