Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại không rõ nghĩa, ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai nhiều. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi (có/không), rồi bổ sung 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ ai tặng, khi nào, nơi đi). Sử dụng cấu trúc đơn giản, thì quá khứ, và liên từ nếu cần để nối ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. It was a small blue bicycle with a basket, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood.

提案: Câu trả lời lộn xộn và nhiều lỗi từ vựng (nhầm 'pies'/'rice pie'). Trả lời rõ ràng (yes/no/it depends), nêu lí do cụ thể và ví dụ, dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, for example, also). Tránh lặp từ và giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and exercise because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and older people often ride bikes in the mornings and afternoons to go to school or the market.

× I always rise by with my parents when I try.

✓ I always ride my bike with my parents when I try.

The student used 'rise by' and 'by with' which are incorrect prepositions and verb choice. The correct verb is 'ride' for using a bike, and the preposition 'with' is used to indicate accompaniment. Also include 'my bike' to clarify the object. Suggestion: use 'ride' + object and 'with' for accompanying people, e.g., 'I always ride my bike with my parents when I try.'

× In my opinion, my country or pies are popular in my country because of old people and young people are really like rice pie in in their free time and in the afternoon.

✓ In my opinion, bicycles are popular in my country because both older and younger people really like riding bikes in their free time and in the afternoon.

The sentence has several structural and word-choice issues: 'my country or pies' is meaningless and likely 'bikes' was intended; repetition 'in my country' is unnecessary; 'old people and young people' is better phrased as 'older and younger people'; 'really like rice pie' is wrong word choice and probably 'riding bikes' was intended; duplicated 'in' is an error. Suggestions: clarify the subject ('bicycles' or 'bikes'), use parallel phrasing for groups ('both older and younger people'), use the verb phrase 'like riding bikes', and remove redundant phrases.