Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), add one or two specific supporting details, and use a linking word if you add more than one detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for my seventh birthday. Because I practised every afternoon, I learned to ride without the training wheels within a month.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of giving an answer. To improve, state your opinion directly, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples linked with words like "because" or "for example." Keep answers concise and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see bike lanes and shared bicycle services that make cycling convenient.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error: the question form 'Did you have...' requires a past-tense answer, not a repetition. Use a past simple affirmative sentence ('I had') to answer. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' depending on the truth.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. The question asks for opinion in present simple; respond with a full sentence stating your view. Example: 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular.' This fixes the response structure by providing a subject and verb expressing opinion rather than echoing the question.